Feedback on 1st draft shooting script (timeline)

Lauren Parton - "The shooting script looks very professional and is well detailed and systematic."

Callum Robinson - "It looks incredibly detailed and meticulously planned."

Joe Pointon - "Great use of a different style, the time line works well."

From this, I have gathered that my shooting script contains ample detail, both to convey my ideas to others and to help me whilst filming.